To meet the rapidly rising market demand for fish and seafood, suppliers are growing fish twice as fast as their natural growth rate, their feed allotment cut by nearly half and raising them on special diets.
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qiusha9691 2017-08-14 21:03:16
后面的cutting要与raising平行
languagehacker 2016-09-05 14:47:06
后面的cutting要与raising平行
梦雨 2014-11-12 18:35:00
growth rate和fish比较不对等，且逻辑上也不正确；their feed allotment cut 和 raising them 不平行
lukoe 2016-11-24 16:13:50
不对等
xx2312345X 2016-04-17 22:45:42
未划线部分有and注意平行
cantebury 2015-12-09 09:21:30
比较对象，平行结构。 as fast as 前后比较应该在结构上保持平行，有相似的语法结构。 feed alloment and raising。 不平行
grace麦子1 2015-11-15 16:42:42
与后面raising不平行
xinranma 2015-11-15 14:00:27
逗号前同A 后半句cut与后面的raising不对等
jiayou100 2015-09-22 14:48:04
不平行，growing, cutting and raising
jiayou100 2015-09-22 14:48:03
不平行，growing, cutting and raising
jessie_yanhui 2015-09-02 12:59:10
cutting
