For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris was her home, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance.
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angelahyan27 2016-03-21 14:56:09
it-Paris 出现在最前有问题
sissi199005 2014-12-02 22:51:35
时间状语long before放在句子中间有点奇怪，and前后的两个句子主语不一致（感觉这不是重点错误），这个句子语法上应该上没有错误的，但是不是最好的答案
亦又制造 2014-09-29 15:07:45
得考虑未画线的后半句，就是and she remained in France, 就是说前半句从平行的角度来看应该同后面的s vo,且s 是人的情况一直
snow199511 2016-06-07 10:44:12
For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, akward
lixiaoye1002 2016-05-09 22:32:47
For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, akward，且两个修饰语在主句前，akward
stephanie_mama 2016-01-29 16:59:10
将两个introductory elements 一起放在主句前面是awkward 的 Paris was her home, and she remained in France 不平行。
crissmoy 2015-09-23 09:55:20
and前后不平行 IT指代不明
SC430 2015-08-22 13:23:42
两个句子平行，第二个句子主语为代词通常指代第一句的主语。Paris 和 she不可互指。应是Josephine Baker和she互指。
moneysharon 2015-08-05 22:29:53
[我]主語是人不是Paris[正解]1.除了前半句主语是paris而不是J B之外, OG: 将两个introductory elements 一起放在主句前面是awkward 的.2.并列的句子，主语最好一致，Paris和she变换不符合英文的习惯
olivezcy 2015-06-17 15:14:09
"it" is not clear in the sentence
子曰在此 2015-06-16 03:50:44
并列的句子，主语最好一致，Paris和she变换不符合英文的习惯
Jessicajy 2015-06-07 18:38:07
划线后and she并列句，主语代词she,因此划线部分是一个完整的分句，且主语是Baker这个人
