Although the rate of fatty foods consumed in France and the United States is about the same, the death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.
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小星在望天 2015-02-23 16:00:23
关于D中的被动不好Ron大神的解释如下： a rate of fatty foods consumed可能的解释有如下两种，但是任何一种都不符合原意： 1、a rate is consumed. 即被吃掉的比率，显然不对 2、被消费掉的fatty foods有一个自己的比率，也不对。 如果一定要用被动，应该变成a rate at which are consumed，这样才能正确表达原意
WinsLeT_o 2015-03-23 17:58:22
i would think it important to mention the people eating the fatty foods, a detail that's neglected by choice (d). but, more importantly, "the rate of fatty foods consumed" doesn't make literal sense (and, remember, literal sense is the only kind of sense that's worth anything in this particular game). it has 2 possible literal interpretations, neither of which makes any sense: * a "rate of fatty foods" is somehow being consumed; * the fatty foods, which are being consumed, have a "rate" that's all their own. you should say the rate AT WHICH fatty foods are consumed.
gaoyi2202 2015-06-19 20:23:32
consumed引导的是名词修饰语，修饰the rate of fatty food,错误有两点，第一无法表示出动作意味 第二N+PREP+N+修饰语容易引起修饰歧义
Jesterleir 2016-12-20 21:19:49
这里的修饰有问题，consumed到底修饰food 还是修饰rate？rate 不能被consumed
zjy1121 2016-12-19 19:43:22
不是food 的rate ，而是消费的速率，此处有歧义，consumed可以修饰food也可以修饰rate
Fridaymovingon 2016-12-11 11:41:16
D 选项The rate of fatty foods consumed 错，rate不能被consume，应该是fatty foods consumed。
ChessyG 2016-12-07 03:51:24
原来有歧义！！From Ron: "the rate of fatty foods consumed" doesn't make literal sense (and, remember, literal sense is the only kind of sense that's worth anything in this particular game). it has 2 possible literal interpretations, neither of which makes any sense: * a "rate of fatty foods" is somehow being consumed; * the fatty foods, which are being consumed, have a "rate" that's all their own. you should say the rate AT WHICH fatty foods are consumed.
ChessyG 2016-11-28 09:28:07
是被消耗的食物，两国家的rates,谓语动词应用are
jandrea 2016-11-26 13:47:29
应该是人consume的rate而不是food consumed的rate，人的rate比人的死亡率
励志yy 2016-11-16 09:43:59
"the rate of fatty foods consumed" doesn't make literal sense (and, remember, literal sense is the only kind of sense that's worth anything in this particular game). it has 2 possible literal interpretations, neither of which makes any sense: * a "rate of fatty foods" is somehow being consumed; * the fatty foods, which are being consumed, have a "rate" that's all their own. you should say the rate AT WHICH fatty foods are consumed.
laurennnn 2016-10-28 21:31:54
不是fatty food的rate
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-10-08 16:53:11
rate应该修饰consume这个动作，而非food
senyu110 2016-10-08 12:28:37
语义不对。这个选项比较的是被吃掉的肥胖食物的比率
