语法 Sentence Correction-1997

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Although people in France and the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.

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练练林 2014-07-28 21:48:55

cd是考语义

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echooosc 2014-09-21 10:41:36

although从句逻辑主语不需和句子主语一致

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leosis 2015-09-01 11:39:20

DE 的错误在于 原文要表达的意思是两个国家人们吃fatty food 的频率,而不是吃快餐的人占总人口的比例,也不是消费的fatty food的比率。所以 rate of people 不对。rate of fatty food 也不对

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raeraeli 2016-05-31 13:18:28

吃的人数相比, 而非消耗比例相比。

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raeraeli 2016-05-31 13:18:25

吃的人数相比, 而非消耗比例相比。

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chuster 2016-05-25 12:52:40

united states与france平行,可以理解为people in france 和people in US两个国家的人以相同的速度小号fatty foods.

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huiminzi1124 2016-05-05 17:42:41

弄清rate在比什么,是比两个国家人口消费的fatty foods。

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Hygeia992 2016-04-08 14:24:56

注意 DE 选项的表达的意思:D 中,在美、法消耗的高热量食物的速率,并非食物的速率;E中,消耗高热量食物的人的速率。语义均错误。

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Ines要上700 2016-03-14 18:22:54

i would think it important to mention the people eating the fatty foods, a detail that's neglected by choice (d). but, more importantly, "the rate of fatty foods consumed" doesn't make literal sense (and, remember, literal sense is the only kind of sense that's worth anything in this particular game). it has 2 possible literal interpretations, neither of which makes any sense: * a "rate of fatty foods" is somehow being consumed; * the fatty foods, which are being consumed, have a "rate" that's all their own. you should say the rate AT WHICH fatty foods are consumed.

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huyingchuan 2016-02-09 10:07:20

B选项是N+介词+N and并列 .当性质相同的时候 前面的名词和介词一起省略 并不是并列对象不一致

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yupipi1984 2015-12-21 16:30:54

consume消费的比例是一样的而不是人数或者是Fatty food。本题主要是意义的理解

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lyf0420 2015-12-02 15:09:19

意思--DE两个选项的逻辑有问题,抛开定语,D说the rate of food而E说the rate of people--都是不合逻辑的 只有B选项又是主动,意思简单明了

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vickiaro 2015-11-18 15:41:43

弄清rate在比什么,是比两个国家人口消费的fatty foods。 这里consume fatty foods at about the same rate表达很清楚。

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