By developing the Secure Digital Music Initiative, the recording industry associations of North America, Japan, and Europe hope to create a standardized way to distribute songs and full-length recordings on the Internet and it will protect copyright holders and foiling the many audio pirates who copy and distribute digital music illegally.
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马修斯嚓G 2013-11-03 03:59:58
create a way to ...and it ..这个IT 没有指代。主语是associations 不一致
san_dra_1994 2015-09-10 13:17:29
it指代不清
Onestart 2016-03-15 01:25:32
and后面两个成分不平行。it无指代
francescao 2016-09-07 20:55:16
it 不一致 ；protect and foiling 不平行
lovehideto 2016-07-22 07:19:35
PROTECT 和FOILING 不对称
snow199511 2016-06-05 21:17:54
1. protect vs. foiling 2. "it" refers to what?
tina885386121 2016-01-28 09:51:42
protect and foilling 不平行
王大卫 2015-11-08 19:10:19
划线第二个and连接protect和foil的形式要一致，固定搭配 way of doing，it指代不清
sina_2520914463 2015-11-01 05:40:36
it will protect and foiling
飞舞的彩蝶 2015-09-17 16:36:02
and 前后要一致
Heyiii 2015-09-08 19:04:27
will protect 和foiling 不平行
