By developing the Secure Digital Music Initiative, the recording industry associations of North America, Japan, and Europe hope to create a standardized way for distributing songs and full-length recordings on the internet while it protects copyright holders and foils the many audio pirates who copy and distribute digital music illegally.
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RaphelleF 2016-01-07 09:48:46
While gives the sentence an unintentional meaning
wclie 2015-10-18 23:02:14
A，C 都不算错，A 的将来时更好的搭配了 hope to...
nopainnogain 2014-05-16 15:27:54
1. way of doing或者way to do才是正确的 2. while it protects 里面的it指代谁？这个句子的结构看来这个it指代的应该是除了a standardized way之外的某个东西
yalisos 2016-11-12 11:55:05
way to do也是对的 代词指代不清
AngelCHI 2016-10-22 23:10:07
CDE问题都在与it，they指代不明，Ns+Ns用it they指代都是不明确的，而且，另外to protect与to creat并列，逻辑不同，排除
果果724 2016-10-07 21:26:57
划线部分that will protect由修饰成分变成了一个句子，重心偏移；且固定搭配way of doing；creat和protect并列会曲解原句意思；两个平行，一个是distribute和record，另一个是protect和foil
francescao 2016-09-07 20:52:09
我觉得该选项错误的地方是使用while连词。while做连词，两个意思：1. 让步，然而（显然不合适）2. 当。。。时候。而句子的内容protect和foil显然不能做时间状语修饰hope to create（当标准发行方法保护版权所有者时，NAJE 希望去创造一种……）
琴惊 2016-07-31 11:33:57
While gives the sentence an unintentional meaning
lovehideto 2016-07-22 07:17:18
way of doing或者way to do才是正确的，while it的it 指代不明
snow199511 2016-06-05 21:15:35
a way for = unidiommatic
克村 2016-04-16 22:41:02
it 指代不明. a way of sth, a way to do
tian4690 2016-03-20 07:48:01
a way for distributing is unidiomatic. CORRECT: a way TO DO X CORRECT: a way OF DOING X
vennie 2016-03-17 10:41:03
while 后面从句，改变了句子结构
