By developing the Secure Digital Music Initiative, the recording industry associations of North America, Japan, and Europe hope to create a standardized way to distribute songs and full-length recordings on the Internet while they will protect copyright holders and foil the many audio pirates copying and distributing digital music illegally.
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greentea 2015-10-15 10:48:22
word "they" is not clear
RaeyW 2015-03-15 00:23:38
way to do 表目的，和文艺不符；另外，they没有找到先行词
siasiasia 2016-04-09 13:52:48
while有转折的含义 逻辑错误；
Dragon7 2016-11-23 17:53:08
they 指代不明
Dragon7 2016-11-23 17:53:08
they 指代不明
francescao 2016-09-07 20:54:17
they 指代不明
lovehideto 2016-07-22 07:18:35
they指代什么？后面的主语应该是WAY但是they不能指代way.
Kieren 2016-07-13 15:24:36
第一个and distribute songs 和 full-length recordings不对等
胖哒鱼 2016-06-25 11:35:11
way of doing 固定搭配 and并列结构 前后形式一致 while将句子重心改变了，从修饰成分变成了从句
snow199511 2016-06-05 21:16:57
they ?
一只小花卷 2016-04-14 15:11:45
foil sb. doing用法错误，排除
Maggie有颗少女心 2016-03-29 15:39:20
they混淆主语，不是associations foil & protect
