The single-family house constructed by the Yana, a Native American people who lived in what is now northern California, was conical in shape, its framework of poles overlaid with slabs of bark, either cedar or pine, and banked with dirt to a height of three to four feet.
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krychen 2014-05-01 12:38:49
与其并列的是overlaid with
773 2014-05-12 20:06:39
a height of 和as high as的解释（from RON）： there is a meaning shift. if you say 'dirt as high as four feet', you're implying that most of the dirt is well below the four-foot level, but that four feet is the maximum height. the correct answer choice, on the other hand, states that the height of the dirt bank is consistently three to four feet.
龙纹身的女孩 2014-07-09 22:01:05
如何判断banked是修饰its framework of poles 还是the single-family house？ 1-句子主干：the single-family house was conical in shape, its framework overlaid with..., 插入语, and banked with...。如果banked 要修饰the single-family最好提前到in shape 后面，避免句子腹部过长。 2-overlaid with n. 与 banked with n.结构类似。
取个名字太麻烦 2016-10-01 11:28:26
banked with与overlaid with并列，height of +数量词，表高度，例如a height of 6000 metres。
josie_dong 2016-08-25 19:18:34
和was conical平行
mozzmozzie 2016-08-04 11:43:42
banked和前面overlaid平行修饰poles
SophiaXie0430 2016-06-02 10:11:21
a height of 和as high as的解释（from RON）： there is a meaning shift. if you say 'dirt as high as four feet', you're implying that most of the dirt is well below the four-foot level, but that four feet is the maximum height. the correct answer choice, on the other hand, states that the height of the dirt bank is consistently three to four feet.
SophiaXie0430 2016-06-02 10:10:03
overlaid with 和 banked with 平行
ocean09960802 2016-05-31 20:26:36
与其并列的是overlaid with
xx2312345X 2016-05-25 23:07:19
overlaid并列还是与was conical in shape并列 即便分不清是和哪个并列也没有关系 反正不能用was banked 不然成被动了，逻辑上不通
huiminzi1124 2016-05-10 18:05:37
句子结构 The house…, …, was conical …, its framework… overlaid with…, …, and banked with… 主句是主系表结构was conical，后面跟并列的"名词+过去分词"独立主格结构，overlaid with…,and banked with都修饰framework。 考点 句子结构、平行对称 句子结构-独立主格，名词+过去分词。 平行对称，各选项中and连接对象不同时，注意原句表达的意思，从逻辑意思上出发，确定应该 与主句还是从句并列。 选项分析 (A) 正确，banked with与overlaid with并列，height of +数量词，表高度，例如a height of 6000 metres。 (B) that没有指代对象。 (C) 复数them没有指代对象，前面是单数名词framework。 (D) and was banked...在语法上与主句was conical…并列，改变原句意思。 (E) and was banked...在语法上与主句was conical…并列，改变原句意思；that没有指代对象。 ------------------------------------------------------- 如果没看懂，怎么判断平行？ 第一，看介词，overlaid和banked后面都是with，可见这两者平行的可能性大。 第二，看整体结构，句中先是简短地说了个conical in shape，然后写了堆overlaid with slabs of bark, either cedar or pine，那么大概就可以猜测后面这一大堆banked with dirt to a height of three to four feet是和后者对应，一方面字数差不多，另一方面都是Ved+Prep+Noun+Modifier. 第三，假设banked with dirt to a height of three to four feet是和conical in shape平行，那这整个句子根据简洁清晰的原则最好写成...was banked with xxx and conical in shape, its framework of poles overlaid with slabs of bark, either cedar or pine. 既然GMAC没这么写，那说明这种想法可能就有问题。
anne_yu 2016-05-07 13:32:18
平行关系： its framework 【overlaid with】 .... AND 【banked with】....
玛莎基 2016-04-19 11:25:59
句子结构 The house…, …, was conical …, its framework… overlaid with…, …, and banked with… 主句是主系表结构was conical，后面跟并列的"名词+过去分词"独立主格结构，overlaid with…,and banked with都修饰framework。 a height of 和as high as的解释（from RON）： there is a meaning shift. if you say 'dirt as high as four feet', you're implying that most of the dirt is well below the four-foot level, but that four feet is the maximum height. the correct answer choice, on the other hand, states that the height of the dirt bank is consistently three to four feet.
