As the honeybee's stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
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六之风 2013-11-17 19:59:36
this不能裸奔
Deprofundis 2014-07-09 23:33:22
1. this 不能单独做主语 2. causing 在这里修饰act of stinging，但这里显然不是results in the act，而是导致 sustain a fatal injury
cocowu 2014-07-04 19:23:43
the act of stinging is wrong, cuz results in + 結果非VING
scutron 2016-07-09 14:41:29
this 不能指代事情
Devens 2016-04-05 20:29:01
整句话结构不对，this指代不明
fishanne 2016-01-16 19:31:33
this没有明确指代 result in the act of doing 错误，结果不是doing
fishanne 2016-01-16 19:30:21
result in the act of doing 错误 doing 不是result 的结果
BobZ 2015-12-20 13:31:24
this ,that ,those 在表示指代时，通常需要补充名词，且不可指代前面整个句子的意思；
独角兽斯威特 2015-10-31 16:10:44
act of stinging causing 错误， 而且 this 无指代
wdlsshp 2015-09-13 21:33:32
This， that， those不能当做名词使用。 相应地可以使用it them or they.
shisu0610041 2015-09-12 11:33:05
the pronoun "this" in (a) doesn't refer to any particular noun. this consideration also kills (a).
Leozhong 2015-08-17 15:31:57
this不能裸奔
JoMeow 2014-11-04 01:58:31
you can only say "X results in Y" when X is an ACTION. if X is an OBJECT, you can NEVER say that X "results" in anything.
