Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping; someone who comes in for a basketball will leave with a basketball only and not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang as well.
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SharonUSA 2015-07-14 19:02:47
unlike平行结构 只剩CD可选 C语序严重不合理
乐天派L 2015-11-28 23:16:26
题目释义：Shoppers in in sporting goods stores, unlike those in department stores, do…；someone… 考点 比较（comparison） 逻辑意思（logical prediction） 比较对象对等。 各个分句之间的逻辑关系。 平行对称 副词的修饰位置：even修饰比较级时，放在比较级之前。ever放在助动词之后。only、first放在被强调的成分之前，alone放在被强调的成分之后。 选项分析 A. shoppers和department stores不对等；not…but…不平行，而且not…but…用在这里并不符合逻辑。 B.shoppers和department stores不对等；also和as well重复；Only位置改变做adj.只修饰basketball。 C. do very little impules shopping和do not buy a pair of skis一个是概括，一个是细化，功能不同无法平行。 D. correct。两个不同层次却有联系的句子用semicolon连接是最合适的。And…as well不是重复，此处的and连接了a pair of skis和a boomerang，as well是说明除了篮球之外没有多买，相当与also；only位于句尾修饰整个句子，强调动作leave。 E，比较问题同A；they没有指代；Only位置改变做adj.只修饰basketball。
foreverlulay 2015-07-11 21:34:15
出现like和unlike就要注意比较对象的对等。 Like与Unlike之后链接的比较对象不能省略
Jesterleir 2016-12-25 15:34:40
Like与Unlike之后链接的比较对象不能省略,因此首先注意比较对象要全等，shoppers in...unlike in...,对象比较对象全等，其次用分号隔开两个句子使得句子变得完整，语意完整
yiyi11311 2016-10-15 20:53:20
结构更清晰明了
Cassie0821 2016-08-05 23:57:03
And…as well不是重复，此处的and连接了a pair of skis和a boomerang，as well是说明除了篮球之外没有多买，相当与also；only位于句尾修饰整个句子，强调动作leave。
ChiantiChen 2016-08-05 19:24:15
unlike 后比较内容要对等，不能省略，和than不一样，不能只用介词短语 And…as well ：不是重复，此处的and连接了a pair of skis和a boomerang，as well是说明除了篮球之外没有多买，相当与also；only位于句尾修饰整个句子，强调动作leave
ChiantiChen 2016-08-05 19:24:12
unlike 后比较内容要对等，不能省略，和than不一样，不能只用介词短语 And…as well ：不是重复，此处的and连接了a pair of skis和a boomerang，as well是说明除了篮球之外没有多买，相当与also；only位于句尾修饰整个句子，强调动作leave
ethansue 2016-07-29 13:34:25
1) there's no such construction as "A, B, but C". i.e., "but" can't link three things in the way that "and" or "or" could. 2) it makes no sense to put all 3 of these things in parallel, because they don't belong in parallel; the last two are an explanation of the first one. i.e., the last two things are an explanation of the idea that these shoppers "do very little impulse shopping".
anne_yu 2016-05-08 12:34:03
do very little impules shopping和do not buy a pair of skis一个是概括，一个是细化，功能不同无法平行。用分号隔开成两句就可以
Kae6 2016-03-28 14:23:52
those没有“省略”，正确；a basketball only只带走篮球，正确；and并列表达正确
爱潘惠君一搏 2016-03-23 06:42:42
note difference btw there is someone and there is no someone. don't try to judge which structure is better. instead think about the meaning and logic difference!!!!!!!!!!
jessicachow 2016-01-31 11:42:53
unlike前后shoppers和those（shoppers）平行，分号用法正确。
