Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, not buying a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but they leave with a basketball only.
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Jessicajy 2015-06-13 19:50:09
Unlike后面不可以加介词短语，即便省略也不能省去those；not…but…不平行，应改为but leaving with a basketball only，但这样改了也有but leaving修饰they come in for a basketball的歧义，还是不好
alva暖暖 2016-12-08 18:14:23
unlike后面要加名词，not but不平行
Kae6 2016-03-28 14:06:23
unlike后面的shoppers不能省略
SUNSHINE218 2016-08-03 11:24:03
like 与unlike 要注意主语的对称性 前后比较的时候 是不能省略主语的
Kae6 2016-03-28 14:06:24
unlike后面的shoppers不能省略
gloria熊 2015-10-04 20:54:26
【逻辑错误】but前后并没有明显的转折关系
鲨崽 2014-07-16 17:40:57
比较对象的核心名词是shoppers啊
