Shoppers in sporting goods stores, unlike those in department stores, do very little impulse shopping, do not buy a pair of skis and a boomerang when they come in for a basketball, but leave with only a basketball.
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HugePanda 2015-09-10 14:48:36
这里面 they没有指代不清的 情况 句子是 "they come in for....but they leave.." 这里的they只能指代人 整个句子唯一的活物 也就是 shoppers 所以they只能是指代shoppers 这里错误是 do very little... do not...but leave, 首先是这三个逻辑上不构成平行结构 显然后两个是第一个“do little impulse shopping“的例子， 其次 but 不能连接 三者 A, B,but C 不存在。 only 不能换位 是一个很好的decision point
Kae6 2016-03-28 14:22:32
A，B，butC错；do..do not逻辑上不应平行；only a basketball只带一个篮球，意思错了
慕一 2014-05-12 21:30:17
逻辑不通。不买skis但只留下basketball。。。
Jesterleir 2016-12-25 15:37:10
逻辑错误，首先有两个do,而中间没有连词，其次后头用了but,但并没有转折意思，but不能连接三个东西
ChessyG 2016-12-20 10:04:48
不知道自己为什么会选择这个，漏洞百出的选项！ 两个do; ｔｈｅｙ只带不清
alva暖暖 2016-12-08 18:20:36
but不能连接三个东西
sasazz 2016-11-18 10:24:24
RON: 1) there's no such construction as "A, B, but C". i.e., "but" can't link three things in the way that "and" or "or" could. 2) it makes no sense to put all 3 of these things in parallel, because they don't belong in parallel; the last two are an explanation of the first one. i.e., the last two things are an explanation of the idea that these shoppers "do very little impulse shopping".
laurennnn 2016-10-28 22:24:45
这里逗号but的结构，让do little impulse shopping和do not buy和but leave平行了，但实际上do not buy but leave是解释do very little impulse shopping的
yiyi11311 2016-10-15 20:53:45
they指代不明
yiyi11311 2016-10-15 20:53:44
they指代不明
LaraNg 2016-09-21 12:13:49
do very little impules shopping和do not buy a pair of skis一个是概括，一个是细化，功能不同无法平行，而且but不能连接三个并列成分，只能连接两个，所以即便不考虑逻辑上的层次，do not buy之前也要加上and
vannygirl 2016-09-15 15:44:06
"they"指代不明 2）"when they come in for basketball" 似乎也同时修饰do very little impulse shopping, 从meaning上讲不通， 好像只有来买篮球的人do very little impulse shopping, 其余的shopper不是这样的。
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-04 20:35:06
逻辑不通 后面应该只是对前半句的举例说明，连在一起就把特殊化的例子一般化了
