The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades, and large, integrated companies such as Bethlehem Steel once conducted operations from mining at one end of the process to shipping at the other have greatly downsized, or in some cases shut down altogether.
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xiaowen1221 2016-06-02 21:15:41
1. 语法结构--conducted 在句中可作定语/形容词，引起了歧义。 2.逻辑意思---and 表并列，逻辑意思牵强
Jessicajy 2015-06-19 15:21:16
and 连词不正确，用while和and感觉都是再说别的工业
Cherry00721 2014-06-26 23:28:22
The steel industry has changed radically over the last two decades 后面的从句是对这句话的解释怎么change的（划线举例中还是在说steel业怎样怎样）。 所以并列的逻辑关系是不对的。while和and感觉都是再说别的工业。杀DE 同时GMAT有as和with的时候很少用with
snow199511 2016-06-22 19:55:28
DE 同时杀，因为改变了原来的句意
