Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, in which widespread swelling and stiffness immobilize the injured area until it has healed, the body's more localized response to sunburn results in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
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ian709 2014-06-15 00:28:44
A 主语修饰正确，错误在 the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting resulting 修饰语 和 more locate平行。分词和形容词并行语法是可以的，但是 resluts 表示前面动作的结果，语义上只能表结果：可以是“，resulting" 这样是可以的。 B 主语修饰错误 instead 和unlike 语义重复 C 主语修饰错误，one 裸奔错误， E until 后接ing 不和语义，不能表示until某个时间段。instead unlike 语义重复The body's inflammable response 与the body's more localized response平行。 D好，result表示response的结果。
outsider0214 2013-11-08 19:04:55
the body's inflammatory response 与 body's more localized response对应
huiminzi1124 2016-04-09 11:59:24
1. instead 和unlike 重复，因此有了unlike后面无需其他表示对比的介词 2. 平行
squirrelfan 2016-10-29 21:39:19
与人体对割伤和扭伤产生的的炎症反应不同，其中割伤和扭伤需对普遍的肿胀和僵硬，用固定受伤部位，直到它已痊愈，人体更容易对晒伤产生反应，在皮肤未晒伤和晒伤部位划分，产生明显的区分线。
squirrelfan 2016-10-29 21:39:18
与人体对割伤和扭伤产生的的炎症反应不同，其中割伤和扭伤需对普遍的肿胀和僵硬，用固定受伤部位，直到它已痊愈，人体更容易对晒伤产生反应，在皮肤未晒伤和晒伤部位划分，产生明显的区分线。
kongling 2016-10-10 09:33:18
until it has healed指的就是一个过程，中文可以理解为“直到到它愈合（之前的这段时间内）”。until healing 直到愈合 ,不能表示一个时间段。。。
yyyyaaaa 2016-10-02 11:07:55
BC比较的不对，应该是body's response之间比较 E的instead和unlike表示的语义重复了， 转载Ron："until healing" would apply to the subject "swelling and stiffness". those don't heal; the injured area does. therefore, you need a construction that changes the subject to "the injured area" -- or a pronoun that stands for those words, as in the actual correct answer. A中 and resulting不平行
feizhutou 2016-09-13 03:13:28
results in .. the body's inflammatory response 与 body's more localized response对应 in which 从句，非限定性修饰前面的句子
aaronzjy 2016-07-13 16:31:38
考点：修饰，和语义。 A 主语修饰正确，错误在 the body's response to sunburn is more localized and resulting resulting 修饰语 和 more locate平行。分词和形容词并行语法是可以的，但是 resluts 表示前面动作的结果，语义上只能表结果：可以是“，resulting" 这样是可以的。 B 主语修饰错误 instead 和unlike 语义重复 C 主语修饰错误，one 裸奔错误， E until 后接ing 不和语义，不能表示until某个时间段。instead unlike 语义重复The body's inflammable response 与the body's more localized response平行。 D好，result表示response的结果。
落落落香寒 2016-06-29 21:15:12
body's inflammatory和the body's responses平行
LePetitPrince 2016-06-13 16:30:49
"until healing" it's wrong, because "until healing" would apply to the subject "swelling and stiffness". those don't heal; the injured area does. therefore, you need a construction that changes the subject to "the injured area" -- or a pronoun that stands for those words, as in the actual correct answer.
Chloefxy 2016-06-09 13:16:14
body's inflammatory和the body's responses平行
Goooaway 2016-06-05 13:42:28
until it has healed指的就是一个过程，中文可以理解为“直到到它愈合（之前的这段时间内）”直到它愈合是说的the injured area。 这个immobilize会一直持续到愈合之后， 因此【愈合先结束，immobilize才会结束。】愈合heal用现在完成时意思更合理。而不是进行时
