Unlike the body's inflammatory response to cuts and sprains, with the injured area immobilized by means of widespread swelling and stiffness until healing, sunburn generates a more localized response in the body, one resulting in a distinct line dividing affected and unaffected areas of the skin.
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SuperFreDWWW 2016-10-07 21:09:05
means of多余，比较不平行
hoper 2016-03-17 16:59:59
one不单独出现
hoper 2016-04-13 21:54:13
one裸奔
落落落香寒 2016-06-29 21:01:20
response和sunburn不平行 this、that、those等等代词不能单独出现做代词，后面必须加上一个能体现先行词性质的noun才能做先行词的代词，单独出现的this，one之类的就叫做裸奔
fantasticW 2016-06-16 11:42:16
response和sunburn不平行
托福必胜！！！ 2016-05-29 15:13:24
response和sunburn不平行 this、that、those等等代词不能单独出现做代词，后面必须加上一个能体现先行词性质的noun才能做先行词的代词，单独出现的this，one之类的就叫做裸奔
hoper 2016-03-17 17:22:46
this、that、those等等代词不能单独出现做代词，后面必须加上一个能体现先行词性质的noun才能做先行词的代词，单独出现的this，one之类的就叫做裸奔
ClaireXu 2015-10-22 21:11:32
比较对象不平行，one不单独出现
fighting4g 2015-09-10 09:05:45
unlike结构不平行； one
庞呵呵 2015-08-02 21:33:09
主语修饰错误，one 裸奔错误，
