The organic food industry has organized a successful grassroots campaign-by the use of Web sites, public meetings, as well as mass mailings-that convinced the Department of Agriculture to change the proposed federal regulations for organically grown food.
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BobZ 2015-12-08 15:42:57
and不可以换为as well as，as well as只是一个修饰语，其使mass mailings与前两项的并列关系改变为从属结构，而且并没有A, B, as well as C的结构；the use of表达wordy；
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-11 21:28:12
as well as mass maillings可以直接划掉。这样的话后面的意思就不对了
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-21 17:47:34
another way to figure out that this is wrong is to realize that "as well as ..." is a MODIFIER, and thus can be stricken from the sentence without affecting the surrounding grammar. that's problematic: if you strike "as well as mass mailings" from (d), you get remaining words that clearly don't work. remember: "as well as" is NOT a replacement for "and".
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-21 17:48:39
finally, the easiest way to kill (d) is to note that the construction "X, Y, as well as Z" simply doesn't exist. the only way to properly string three items in a list is "X, Y, and Z".
xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 15:04:56
D. By using错误同C；and不可以换为as well as，as well as只是一个修饰语，其使mass mailings与前两项的并列关系改变为从属结构，而且并没有A, B, as well as C的结构；the use of表达wordy；用了convinced一般过去时表示convinced发生在has organized之前，逻辑含义不合理。
jessicachow 2016-01-28 17:37:14
and不能用as well as 代替，没有A, B, as well as C的结构，另外，as well as是一个modifier，去掉该成分，句子 意思不变。
liqijie3242656 2014-07-28 14:00:07
by the use of成了orgnize的方式状语，不对
