The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, double as much as the increase of the previous year.
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linda09192010 2015-01-30 10:19:26
double应该改为doubling，这样划线成分才能修饰前面整个分句，double as much as是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用twice as many as这个结构;即便as much as能成功修饰number也不对，数量应该用 great来修饰，
Monicca 2016-11-23 16:28:37
double：1.形容词，这里不行，如果是形容词就是同位语？前面没有修饰的名词 2.动词也不行，没有连词
CelesteTOEFL 2016-09-14 10:26:17
double=twice as much as，这个句子把两个结杂糅了。
Lottieeee 2016-10-11 11:25:43
"the increase in X" means that X itself has increased. therefore, "the increase in the previous year" doesn't make sense, because the implication would be that the previous year itself had increased (what would that possibly mean?). "the increase of TIME PERIOD", by contrast, means exactly what it should mean in this particular instance.
xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 14:51:46
double应该改为doubling，这样划线成分才能修饰前面整个分句，double as much as是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用twice as many as这个结构;即便as much as能成功修饰number也不对，数量应该用 great来修饰，见下面补充5
jessicachow 2016-01-28 16:28:24
double应该为Ving形式，修饰前面的整句话，如过是“double”则是做同位语，修饰comma前面的名词，与句子含义不符。as much as 不能修饰the number of...the number of用greater修饰。
vickiaro 2015-11-16 11:51:35
double as much as是同位语修饰词(appositive modifier)，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用twice as many as这个结构;即便as much as能成功修饰number也不对，数量应该用 great来修饰。
mim 2015-04-06 11:33:50
D E 都要有一个数字，才能用twice
mim 2015-04-06 11:12:28
D E 都要有一个数字，才能用twice
nicolexzs 2014-10-23 14:10:39
double应该改为doubling，这样划线成分才能修饰前面整个分句。 double as much as是同位语修饰词，要紧接其修饰的内容，在此句子中逗号前不是一个figure，所以不能用twice as many as这个结构；即便as much as能修饰number也不对，数量应该用 great来修饰。
