语法 Sentence Correction-4271

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The number of people flying first class on domestic flights rose sharply in 1990, doubling the increase of the previous year.

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Egoyiyy 2016-03-17 10:19:18

(1)V-ing表示伴随状语时,其逻辑主语必是主句主语,即主语主语能够发出V-ing的动作,且V-ing动作发生在主句动作发生的过程内; (2)V-ing表示结果状语时,其没有单纯的逻辑主语,造成V-ing动作的原因是整个主句主谓描述的内容; 这里发生人数double时间肯定不包含在rose时间内,应该再rose之后,因为1990年的人数是逐渐rose,最终到年底才发现原来这一整年的人数是前一年人数的double. 所以这里属于第2种情况,那么doubling修饰的应该是前面整句话表达的意思,就是the number of people ..rose.., 因此这里和比较the increase of ..对等 自己错选A的原因: 认为doubling的伴随状语,逻辑主语是the number。 因而,认为the number of people (1990年坐头等舱的人数)不能和1989年坐头等舱增加的人数 相比较。

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Ellen1889 2014-07-30 16:15:44

(3) If the noun in question is already an explicitly numerical quantity, then you should use neither "much" nor "many". instead, you should just use "twice" or "double" by itself.   e.g., twice the increase --> "increase" is an explicitly numerical quantity   (4) These rules are followed pretty closely.   so, for instance:   twice as much water --> correct, since "water" is an uncountable noun (but is not an explicitly numerical quantity)   twice the water... --> incorrect, since water is not a numerical quantity   twice as much as the increase... --> incorrect; redundant   twice the increase... --> correct   注意不能看到the increase就认定它是不可数的,要用much来修饰,而应该看the increase所指向的东西。

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想去法國的小周 2015-09-21 10:54:23

Twice as many as 是同位语,…, as many as … 中as many as 只能修饰逗号前面紧挨着的那个名词,所以DE排除 Rose/double是两个谓语动词,这里需要doubling来修饰整个句子,C排除。 The increase in X 表示X本身的增加。所以Increase in the previous year中,the previous year增加是说不通的,B错。 The increase of TIME PERIOD 表示在这个时间段内增加的内容 B中的that也有错误。That 指代the number of people? 那of就多余了。

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leahliulliu1 2016-11-19 22:00:43

doubling作结果状语,修饰主句,是上一年的increase和1990年的increase相比较(主句的一整句话)

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leahliulliu1 2016-11-19 21:55:39

句意:今年的增长(increase)是去年(increase)的两倍 double是使increase两倍,ving作状语修饰主句

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EmeraldChen 2016-07-04 10:33:33

今年增长是去年增长翻倍

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眞白 2016-03-17 20:22:36

自己以为double和increase不能接在一起。所以错了。

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xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 14:57:32

  3. 关于twice as many/much as结构:   (http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/the-number-of-people-flying-first-t5600.html)   (1) If you say "twice as many", then this construction should be paired with acountable noun.   e.g., twice as many dogs --> "dogs" is a countable noun   (2) If you said "twice as much", then this construction should be paired with anuncountable noun.   e.g., twice as much water --> "water" is an uncountable noun   (3) If the noun in question is already an explicitly numerical quantity, then you should use neither "much" nor "many". instead, you should just use "twice" or "double" by itself.   e.g., twice the increase --> "increase" is an explicitly numerical quantity   (4) These rules are followed pretty closely.   so, for instance:   twice as much water --> correct, since "water" is an uncountable noun (but is not an explicitly numerical quantity)   twice the water... --> incorrect, since water is not a numerical quantity   twice as much as the increase... --> incorrect; redundant   twice the increase... --> correct   注意不能看到the increase就认定它是不可数的,要用much来修饰,而应该看the increase所指向的东西。

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xiaobaitu 2016-02-18 14:50:14

. Correct;这里的double是"make twice as great"的意思,也就是使increase/growth两倍;present participle结构修饰前面整个分句。4. AlienX: "of XXX(年份)"在OG/Prep上常出现, 所以of previous year没问题   (http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-373482-1-1.html ):   prep1#245: In no other historical sighting did Halley's comet cause such a worldwide sensation as in its return of 1910-1911.

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ypheroin 2016-01-25 11:22:49

doubling 做状语表示结果,其逻辑主语不是the number, 而是整个句子的结果。the number rose 了以后,这个increase doubling the increase of previous yr. 2. A of a year (19xx) 结构没问题,不需要改成A in 19xx。

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lkid 2015-09-27 19:31:03

注意比较对象是the increase而非number

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juncylam 2015-09-24 09:40:35

注意比较对象是the increase而非number! V.ING做伴随状语 the increase of

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