语法 Sentence Correction-4189

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Lenders and building managers in the southwestern section of the city report that because the rental market in the area renewed and the willingness of banks to lend money increased, therefore, apartment buildings are being rehabilitated at a pace unseen for a decade.

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LynnWei 2014-10-16 18:29:20

because & therefore redundency

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无敌的肥非仔 2015-10-24 14:16:07

because 和therefore重复了,renewed为及物动词,用法不正确。

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CAOSIJIA 2015-10-19 22:07:55

不平行

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piupiu雨雨 2014-11-05 15:48:09

Because与therefore语义重复 renew 应该被动

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