In few United States cities today, a river is the focal point of urban life, but the river in San Antonio winds through the middle of the business district, and the River Walk, or Paseo del Rio, is the city's most popular attraction.
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lyf0420 2015-12-04 09:38:20
句子的意思--没有no longer这个句子毫无重点的陈述一个few的事实 而E中体现出了美国社会前后的变化,注意D的逗号太多了也是一个问题
海蓝新雨 2015-07-25 12:13:34
河应该都是圣安东尼奥管辖区以内的，所以表述不对
lok19600618 2014-05-03 11:31:51
no longer是部分否定，这个答案变成了全部否定
shisu0610041 2017-01-08 13:09:46
原句当中有No longer表示的意思更多的是现在美国的城市中，河流很少成为都市生活的两端点，潜意思想表达过去美国的城市生活中，河流曾经作为焦点过，D中去掉之后就没有这个意思，D中更多的表达从过去到现在，河流从未成为过城市中心
halowwww 2016-12-18 16:40:15
choice d: drastic change in meaning this sentence has completely gotten rid of any reference to the concept of 'no longer'. while all the other sentences say that things have changed, this sentence presents the situation as if it's always been that way.
ChessyG 2016-11-29 01:27:13
其实要说Ｄ确实有个问题 也是相较于Ｅ而言 其逗号太多 对于读者起到了一定的干扰作用 此题最好最安全的做法还是句意 一个意思的完整性及强调的事物往往不是根据什么本意 而是两者相比谁更好 句意！！
apple_sharlock 2016-11-28 15:28:27
前一句已经肯定了river的地位 后一句but的转折不正确
linlvyun 2016-11-18 17:16:30
改变句意
yiyi11311 2016-10-17 16:59:50
没有no longer是不对的
糯米团子QUQ 2016-10-07 13:41:25
drastic change in meaning --- this sentence has completely gotten rid of any reference to the concept of 'no longer'. while all the other sentences say that things have changed, this sentence presents the situation as if it's always been that way.
糯米团子QUQ 2016-10-07 13:38:50
the correct answer here is still pretty ugly, so let's criticize the four incorrect choices. choice A: faulty comparison: 'unlike many u.s. cities, ... the river in san antonio...' --> can't compare cities to a river choice B: comparison isn't so good: the second part should start directly with 'the river' (instead of 'in san antonio the river...'), so that the comparison is more clear. much more importantly, poor use of the relative pronoun 'which': '...cities in the united states, which is no longer the focal point...' relative pronouns like which, by default, refer to the noun that's closest to the left, which in this case is the united states. therefore, this relative pronoun is used in a way that's either ambiguous (if you allow it to potentially refer to other nouns) or just plain wrong (if you follow the rule strictly). choice C: faulty comparison again 'the river...' is being compared to san antonio. choice D: drastic change in meaning this sentence has completely gotten rid of any reference to the concept of 'no longer'. while all the other sentences say that things have changed, this sentence presents the situation as if it's always been that way.
honeydew 2016-10-01 13:32:37
语义改变
yaomaczhang 2016-09-24 04:56:35
去掉了no longer改变了句意
