Moving into the first rank of American newspapers only after Katharine Graham's becoming its publisher in 1963, The Washington Post won high praise under her command for its unrelenting reporting of the Watergate scandal.
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lyqsunny 2014-06-26 22:56:51
AE里面选一个时，E里面Sb's becoming动名词推迟选 。A中是两个强调句并列，没有问题。
ypheroin 2016-01-30 11:54:52
after KG's becoming < after KG became... 2. moving into first rank 和won high praise 是平行的结构。二者之间即不能同时发生表示伴随，moving也不能作为定语修饰TWP（因为是一个发生过的动作而不是一种状态，作为定语不合理）
sonic 2014-10-12 21:35:26
﹝所有格的用法﹞莫忘記，面銜接的名詞，不可以是「抽象性名詞」。
停不下来的雕兄 2016-12-20 21:52:20
,Ving/Ving, 表明和主句在同一时间段上。 The second part described something that happened later. Not something that happened as the WP was "moving into the first rank of xxxx". E.g., Arriving in Seoul for the first time, I was confused by the addresses, which had no apparent relationship to street names. "”> I was confused when I first arrived in Seoul.
Henryhao 2016-11-18 20:25:27
G‘s doing sth，这里很尴尬，用得不好，直接用 G do sth的结构会好一点
糯米团子QUQ 2016-10-05 22:55:19
1、Graham's becoming所有格+ing=awkward。2、迈进一流明显是红花。3、【时间上】：E是说一边迈进一流，一边在报道水门事件。但明显是报道完了水门事件之后才迈进一流。
shisu0610041 2016-09-15 13:56:50
after KG's becoming < after KG became... 2. moving into first rank 和won high praise 是平行的结构。二者之间即不能同时发生表示伴随
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-13 16:51:49
1.Doing, S V O ——因为：Doing在句首，表示“正在做”或“习惯性”动作，给人感觉Moving与won同时发生，模糊了时间先后。2. 我的疑问：its指代一般往前找，而The Washington Post出现在后面。—— 老师解答：代词可能出现在前面，这个是不优，不算绝对错误。
琴惊 2016-08-11 23:19:45
AE里面选一个时，E里面Sb's becoming动名词推迟选
ztg591 2016-07-24 20:32:47
after KG's becoming < after KG became... 2. moving into first rank 和won high praise 是平行的结构。二者之间即不能同时发生表示伴随，moving也不能作为定语修饰TWP（因为是一个发生过的动作而不是一种状态，作为定语不合理）
陈艺蛋蛋蛋 2016-05-18 10:00:37
become是瞬时动作，因此不可以有ing形式，所以排除E
siasiasia 2016-04-07 22:09:19
after one‘s doing啰嗦
Sparrow_7 2016-03-20 20:25:54
AE里面选一个时，E里面Sb's becoming动名词表达方式欠简洁 。A中是两个强调句并列，没有问题
