It was only after Katharine Graham's becoming publisher of The Washington Post in 1963 that it moved into the first rank of American newspapers, and under her command it had won high praise for its unrelenting reporting of the Watergate scandal.
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鸡芝糖浆 2015-09-21 10:40:57
Katharine Graham's becoming publisher表达不简洁，且become是瞬时动作没有ing形式
Simonelee 2014-12-19 23:43:38
Katharine Graham's becoming 不好，had won过去完成时不好；and连接的两个句子不平行
ypheroin 2015-12-29 14:49:52
做错的原因：误以为after 只能做介词，不能做连词引导从句 1. KG's becoming 表达不直接 2. and under her command, 前后句不平行。
sss要上港中文a 2016-09-13 16:25:56
1. 's becoming结构不优，没有V./N.好。A中就是became；2.had won错； 3. and后不是强调句，没有A平行啦。
tina885386121 2016-01-31 09:25:34
Katharine Graham's becoming 错误
彩色的你 2015-12-04 16:34:37
Katharine Graham's becoming
海蓝新雨 2015-07-25 10:36:54
and前是一个强调句，and后是一个普通句，不平行。
momoskull 2015-06-25 14:30:40
不平行
木槿流年11 2015-04-20 09:27:11
after后面用动名词短语不如用谓语动词直接有效；and前后的句子结构不平行
cocowu 2014-07-25 13:40:29
1。sb's Ving , awkward 2. had won-> won
