语法 Sentence Correction-3328

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A study on couples' retirement transitions found that women who took new jobs after retiring from their primary careers reported high marital satisfaction, more so than those who retired completely.

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ziyi001 2014-05-05 15:55:48

Yes, it is. It is used in making a "more than" type of comparison where you also want to refer to a previously stated verb / action (that's where the "so" comes in). In this case, the "so" refers to "reported high marital satisfaction." Notice here that you are comparing two groups of women: those who take new jobs, and those who retire completely. When making a comparison, you have to make sure you explicitly mention both groups. B, C, and D don't do this. (In fact, B and D change the original meaning of the sentence to make the second part of the comparison a hypothetical - but the original meaning is that the ones who take new jobs are being compared to those who don't.) Also remember that, for comparisons, they two things / groups / whatever compared should be parallel. "women who took" and "those who retired" are parallel. The other options aren't.

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又是羊 2016-11-08 04:07:50

so指的是reported high marital satisfaction这个行为

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小灰灰 2014-04-06 17:56:43

so 做代词指代marital satisfaction,和前面的同类比较而且避免了重复。补全后women who took...reported more marital satisfaction than women who retired

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wulfsax 2017-01-10 19:36:31

It is used in making a "more than" type of comparison where you also want to refer to a previously stated verb / action (that's where the "so" comes in). In this case, the "so" refers to "reported high marital satisfaction."

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halowwww 2016-12-27 15:58:16

1.先看清楚句子的本意是希望比较2组人,the ones who take new jobs are being compared to those who don't。所以用they或者表达hypothetical的都不对,they表达的是同一群人。这个选项用those是正确的。//////////2.比较时的平行。 "women who took" and "those who retired" 是平行的。/////////// 3.“more so than"用于making a "more than" type of comparison where you also want to refer to a previously stated verb / action (that's where the "so" comes in). In this case, the "so" refers to "reported high marital satisfaction."

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小揪揪 2016-12-20 01:03:54

so都指代satisfaction

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ChessyG 2016-12-18 03:23:42

只有这个表述最清楚,比较对象是satisfaction其他都不对等;两个带有which的直接排除

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小揪揪 2016-12-09 09:51:27

so:reported high marital satisfaction those 加定语后可以指代不同类的 但是没加,those 可能就是跟前面一样的

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ailing1004 2016-11-28 19:46:36

who took ... more ... than who retired

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leahliulliu1 2016-11-16 19:10:11

women与women相比

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yaomaczhang 2016-09-24 05:23:14

so 指reported high marital satisfaction

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danislj1227126 2016-09-18 04:47:26

so 指代 reported high marital satisfaction those 指women

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