His studies of ice-polished rocks in his Alpine homeland, far outside the range of present-day glaciers, led Louis Agassiz in 1837 to propose the concept of an age when great ice sheets existed where there were areas now temperate.
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ZhuzhuAllTheWay 2014-07-30 23:05:41
in which 的结构优于when------ there were areas比较wordy
Heyiii 2015-09-11 10:14:35
wordy
nopainnogain 2014-05-18 21:16:04
【误认为正确】 1. when的用法正确 2. there were areas是明显的wordy
umasou999 2016-12-27 06:11:16
1、简洁：where there were areas now temperate应该是in what are now temperate areas. where there were句式是wordy的【rhetorical】
sasazz 2016-09-21 18:33:21
这里where跟in which确实是可以替换的，但where没有in which准确；而且where there were强调的是“那里有温带”，但原文的“那里原来是温带”
lixiaoye1002 2016-05-12 18:48:45
there be 错
annie654 2016-05-11 16:15:36
in which 优于when;where there were wordy
moneysharon 2015-08-09 04:42:47
[我]錯在??[正解]1.where不对，应为in+what;或者in+those that/which;there were指代不明2.where there were......wordy there be 句型在GMAT中是wordy
brandonzooo 2015-07-29 18:51:48
were 和 now矛盾 且语句冗杂
nty 2015-06-24 21:50:39
表达很wordy
zssdb 2015-06-17 23:24:15
where不对，应为in+what;或者in+those that/which;there were指代不明。
YolandaVanilla 2015-06-16 15:14:10
where there were......wordy there be 句型在GMAT中是wordy
