A study of food resources in the North Pacific between 1989 and 1996 revealed that creatures of the seabed were suffering because of food supplies, which were dwindling possibly as a result of increasing sea surface temperatures during the same period.
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无敌的肥非仔 2015-08-28 11:47:11
increasing不好 应改为an increase， 此处increase作为名词
AnnaUIBE 2015-07-23 20:23:46
because of food supplies 强调的是food supplies 而这里更应该强调原因，及选项B 中的说法。
AnnaUIBE 2015-07-23 20:23:47
because of food supplies 强调的是food supplies 而这里更应该强调原因，及选项B 中的说法。
Monicca 2016-11-15 10:13:59
as a result of 后面应该是一个表示原因的结果名词，increase有自己的名词形式，所以不用increasing because of 强调的是食物供给，但原文的意思是因为食物供给减少，所以生物才下降
励志yy 2016-11-06 20:55:22
该句强调的是creatures被food supplies 所害，而实际上应该是因为食物减少而suffer。
huiminzi1124 2016-06-15 18:27:39
because of food supplies强调的是food supplies, 而从逻辑上应该强调dwindle; increasing不好,应该用increased或者an increase来表示结果 But note that the modifier difference required a meaning difference in the main body of the sentence. Choice (B) reads "creatures..were suffering because food supplies were dwindling," a logical statement, and close to the meaning in the original sentence. Choice (C) reads "creatures..were suffering because of food supplies." Choice (C) is less logical--the creatures were suffering because they had food supplies? or because there was something wrong with the food supplies they had?
xx2312345X 2016-05-19 17:03:31
But note that the modifier difference required a meaning difference in the main body of the sentence. Choice (B) reads "creatures..were suffering because food supplies were dwindling," a logical statement, and close to the meaning in the original sentence. Choice (C) reads "creatures..were suffering because of food supplies." Choice (C) is less logical--the creatures were suffering because they had food supplies? or because there was something wrong with the food supplies they had?
katritina 2016-05-16 09:10:12
逻辑强调错，应该强调的 因为海平面的上升导致事物的减少，使得在海床的生物承受了太多
Egoyiyy 2016-03-14 19:52:38
because of food supplies强调的是food supplies, 而从逻辑上应该强调dwindle; increasing不好,应该用increased或者an increase来表示结果
tina885386121 2016-01-30 16:59:35
跟A犯的错误差不多，核心词是食物供应，不看which引导的非限制定语从句。逻辑意思错误与A相同。 1.生物正在遭受食物供应 2.食物供应是由于海表面温度升高 做题的时候把非限制性定语从句去了再看看句意嘛！！！
martinachoi 2015-12-21 13:11:27
because of food supplies强调的是food supplies, 而从逻辑上应该强调dwindle
WinnieLee1 2015-12-21 00:01:21
意思重心不对。because of dwindling supplies，强调dwindle
jhb999 2015-10-08 20:30:04
because of food supplies强调的是food supplies, 而从逻辑上应该强调dwindle; increasing不好,应该用increased或者an increase来表示结果
