A study of food resources in the North Pacific between 1989 and 1996 revealed that creatures of the seabed were suffering because food supplies were dwindling, possibly as a result of an increase in sea surface temperatures during the same period.
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superbeckychan 2014-07-02 23:55:48
consensus is that you just can't have 'resulting from' after a comma. 看Manhattan论坛专家的解释：resulting from只能是adj modifier(sth resulting from...)不能是advmodifier ,as a result of是一种惯用法，要记住
sonic 2014-09-07 20:12:18
﹝表示原因或是結果﹞ 使用名詞或是過去分詞，因為跟表達有密切關係！現在分詞並非結果或是一個原因，而是一個一連串的動作，所以表示此二者者，應使用名詞(動詞名詞)或是表示已經發生的過去分詞表示！ ﹝that的限定修飾﹞ 這次我沒有在這邊上當！但是還是要提醒自己；that等限定形容，是修飾「主句的主詞」！ ﹝of+N﹞ 後面+V-ing在AT中一定是錯誤選項！因為+of 之後的名詞，僅著重在of後面的名詞！
Hygeia992 2016-04-11 19:45:03
在A 中， increasing temperature 侧重点在T，而B中as a result of an increase of 侧重点在an increase。
huiminzi1124 2016-06-15 18:23:16
考点: 逻辑表达(Logical Predication) 简洁有效(Rhetorical Construction) 1) 动词的现在分词作形容词,一般含有正在进行的意思 2) which/it 都不能指代整个句子 (A) sb. suffer from B,表示sb.遭受了B, B表示的是遭受的结果,因此使用dwindling不好,现在分词一般表示过程, 应该使用名词或过去分词表示结果; 同样increasing也不好, result from后面接事实,表示原因, 应该用increased或者an increase来代替increasing (B) 正确。 (C) because of food supplies强调的是food supplies, 而从逻辑上应该强调dwindle; increasing不好,应该用increased或者an increase来表示结果 (D) revealed creature of the seabed强调的是名词creature of the seabed, 不能准确的表达revealed的完整意思 (E) 除了D中的错误外, which不能指代整个句子,使用错;increasing使用错误 句子结构: A study… revealed that creatures… were suffering because…
Hygeia992 2016-04-11 19:45:05
在A 中， increasing temperature 侧重点在T，而B中as a result of an increase of 侧重点在an increase。
lingdeling 2016-01-18 21:40:57
不能用，resulting from 因为，doing表伴随时本身就有表示结果的意思，重复累赘。杀
vickiaro 2015-11-01 10:09:50
suffer from 和suffer because不一样 suffer because是因为什么而受罪。suffer from有受罪于什么的意思。
Estaaa 2015-10-25 23:14:55
resulting from只能是adj modifier(sth resulting from...)不能是advmodifier ,as a result of是一种惯用法，要记住。
SharonUSA 2015-09-20 09:30:52
错A "that creatures of the seabed were suffering from dwindling food supplies, possibly resulting from increasing" 错误一：creatures were "suffering from ... food supplies"（尽管food supplies有dwindling修饰，但句子核心是在说seabed suffer from food supplies,这是不对的）。错误二："comma-ing"修饰前面整个句子，则句意变成了food supplies themselves were the result of increasing sea surface temps. Their suffering was caused not by the (dwindling) food supplies themselves, but by the diminution of those supplies. 由于没有选项to represent "dwindling" / "diminution", so we need something else that carries the same meaning -- here, "because supplies were dwindling".
yiran32069 2015-09-16 15:04:25
as a result of 固定搭配
小萌萌0605 2015-05-09 10:11:40
suffer 后面不一定要加from，注意强调的重点在dwindle 和increase.
nfusion 2015-04-30 22:37:15
现在分词为主句主语发出的动词，an increase更自然。
