改变了原句的重心,原句是bones have been discovered ,现在成了A distant relative is Majungatholus atopus。bearing a close resemblance to结构不对,做成了分词
Bearing... is... 在句子里面做了成分,不正确
改变了原句的重心,原句是bones have been discovered ,现在成了A distant relative is Majungatholus atopus。bearing a close resemblance to结构不对,做成了分词
bearing a close resemblance to结构表达笨拙,并且原句中该成分同a distant relative并列,而这里变成分词结构,修饰a distant relative,成为了附属成分
bearing...resemblance累赘
原句结构明显改变啦:并列成分-->主从成分
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