The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, and eventually, if its pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.
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小瓷也忒旧了 2014-06-16 16:52:17
看句子的时候不注意那些真正的考点，而是纠结于一些无谓的词。 这句的问题在于broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, broadening和feigning之间不能仅仅用逗号表示并列，而应该加上and 细节看出一个人的能力！！！
Cassie0821 2016-08-06 21:32:32
hissing， broadening，feigning并列缺少连词and；but后的and连接的两部分不平行
前程万里两不相干 2015-07-18 10:07:33
在平行结构的最后一个成分之前要加上 and
Cloud931218 2016-12-10 06:58:16
A，B，and C
莉莉安700 2016-10-12 08:42:08
with谁
琴惊 2016-08-07 00:22:01
hissing, broadening, feigning并列缺少连词and；and后面无主语
snow199511 2016-06-23 10:08:11
1.broadening....and feigning 2.什么 will fall over and play dead
千去 2016-04-11 08:50:00
E: The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadening the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but with no dangerous fangs and no venom, These two items are falsely made to look like two more items in a series begun with 'hissing...' and 'broadening...'. In addition, there is NO emphasis on the transition 'but', because no new clause is begun at this point. That's bad, because there's a sudden huge shift in what the sentence is talking about at this point. and eventually, if its pursuer is not cowered by the performance, will fall over and play dead.
fishanne 2015-12-24 22:04:48
最后一个并列缺少and
ypheroin 2015-12-08 19:44:50
feigning前面要有and，作为三个并列结构的最后一项
彩色的你 2015-11-29 10:07:02
with no dangerous fangs and no venom,是个介词短语即可修饰名词又可修饰动词 或其他短语 Noun modifier: The snake with no dangerous fangs and no venom would make a nice pet. Adverbial modifier: The snake struck with no dangerous fangs and no venom, so we decided we could tolerate him as a pet.
