The hognose snake puts on an impressive bluff, hissing and rearing back, broadens the flesh behind its head the way a cobra does, feigning repeated strikes, but, having no dangerous fangs and no venom, eventually, if its pursuer is not cowed by the performance, will fall over and play dead.
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Queeniebaby 2016-09-08 16:44:47
eventually是副词,不能连接两个句子,必须加上and.
ypheroin 2015-12-08 19:41:42
hissing, broadening, and feigning是正确的平行结构。 2. eventually是副词不能连接句子，if。。。 will fall是个完整的句子必须有连词连接或者引导。
seline_lover 2015-10-28 13:06:03
broadens和hissing, feigning形式不对等, 并且feigning前面必须加上and; eventually是副词,不能连接两个句子,必须加上and.
grace麦子1 2015-11-15 22:49:38
broaden和feign应该与hissing平行
ZoeyYu 2015-11-09 22:13:01
1.broadens和hissing, feigning形式不对等, 2.并且feigning前面必须加上and; 3.eventually是副词, 不能连接两个句子,必须加上and.
softgirlshadow 2015-11-03 02:12:56
eventually是副词, 不能连接两个句子,必须加上and。
kitwe140631 2014-12-27 22:20:29
broadens和hissing, feigning形式不对等, 并且feigning前面必须加上and; eventually是副词, 不能连接两个句子,必须加上and.
钢蛋蛋蛋蛋 2014-09-16 12:21:07
如果but连接的是feigning和having并列，那么 puts和broadens并列，缺少连词
