The Achaemenid empire of Persia reached the Indus Valley in the fifth century B.C., bringing with it the Aramaic script, and deriving from it both the northern and southern Indian alphabets.
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grace麦子1 2015-11-15 18:51:10
deriving与bringing并列，句子意思变成alphabets从empire产出，意思不对
xiaowen1221 2016-06-02 20:10:01
1. 逻辑论元---如果deriving与bringing并列，那么就是empire 起源于it（皇帝empire），这个逻辑意思说不通。
忘YO草 2014-09-13 16:34:28
原本以为“bring ....and deriving....”忽视了句子的逻辑结构，bring with it 中的 it 修饰的是那个人，而derive from it 中的 it 指的是AS这个东西，两者不能形成并列结构
二黑要上7 2016-10-22 20:21:59
both and里面不平行
Cheriez 2015-08-18 03:51:43
E) The second pronoun "it" is ambiguous: does it refer to the "empire" or to the "script"? Additionally, the original intent of the sentence is significantly changed in meaning.
