The Achaemenid empire of Persia reached the Indus Valley in the fifth century B.C., bringing the Aramaic script with it, from which was derived both northern and southern Indian alphabets.
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考满分老用户 2015-01-29 10:58:17
from which 的which指代it即The Achaemenid empire ，而从逻辑意思上,which应该指代script. 根据倒装结构的要求,was应该用were both the northern and the southern India alphabets were derived from the Aramaic script which 与that 一样就近指代原则。
grace麦子1 2015-11-15 18:44:57
which应该指代transcript，离得越近越好；derive不需要被动
grace麦子1 2015-11-15 18:44:58
which应该指代transcript，离得越近越好；derive不需要被动
languagehacker 2016-09-05 21:07:41
从句当中主谓不一致1from which 的which指代it即The Achaemenid empire ，而从逻辑意思上,which应该指代script. 根据倒装结构的要求,was应该用were 2bring A with B 和bring with B A表达的意思相同 3both the northern and the southern India alphabets derive from the Aramaic script用主动
xiaowen1221 2016-06-02 19:47:47
1.逻辑论元---bringing在主句完全被表达完整后的句尾作结果状语，其主语论元应为empire，X bring Y with X==X带着Y一起。所以在这里的it指代对象为empire。 那么which就近修饰it--empire，南北印度字母表起源于Achaemenid皇帝。逻辑意思明显不通。所以这里的which 逻辑上应该是指代script的。 所以这里正确的用法应该bring with it the Aramaic script，以便which的就近修饰。 bring Y with X=bring with X Y 2.主谓一致---这里用了个倒装结构，主语northern and southern alphabets是主语，谓语应该应该用复数。 原顺序：both northern and southern alphaets were derived from which（script）。
cantebury 2015-12-09 17:37:31
Bring a with b = bring ba . it 代指的eprire of persia, from which 而逻辑上，from which 应该是只带的script. was 错误，定从句的倒装，alphabets were
ypheroin 2015-12-07 20:20:26
从句意上，which应该指代script而不是it（empire），并且定语从句是倒装结构northern and southern derive from/be derived from script
charlene123456 2015-10-10 21:46:55
倒装，主语是alphabets，用were, 意思也没变
libeili 2015-10-07 21:23:09
AS was derives from IA
michellexiyuan 2015-08-26 13:08:41
which的指代有误：在原句中指代it = empire, 而句意须指代script; was应改为were (both north and south) - Bring A with B = Bring with B A
Cheriez 2015-08-18 03:49:59
A) "from which" seems to incorrectly refer to the empire (referenced by the pronoun "it") rather than to the script. Also, the singular verb "was derived" does not agree in number with the plural subject "northern and southern Indian alphabets". Finally, the subject "northern and southern Indian alphabets" is unclear: are there several alphabets, or only one of each?
