语法 Sentence Correction-2807

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Although improved efficiency In converting harvested trees into wood products may reduce harvest rates, demand will be stimulated because of increasing supply and lowering prices, which boost consumption.

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Leon111 2014-07-13 20:02:24

1. 句尾的which不可以修饰整句话 2 前句的主语是improved efficiency,后句主语是demand,不好,不如A,it直接指代前文主语,没有问题

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yaomaczhang 2016-09-27 00:38:00

which修饰了整个句子, because of

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cechymery 2014-08-27 16:53:21

not just lowering prices可以boost consumption,so does increased supply并且improved efficiency可以自己提升供应量,降低价格等,所以可以的

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irafantasy 2016-09-28 18:10:44

1.may 情态动词用词错误 2.demand 应该是 xxx stimulates demand... 3.which指代不清

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snow199511 2016-06-21 19:16:20

boost comsumption这个动作要有个发出者,which指代的就应该是一个能够boost comsumption的东西,which 指代 increasing supply and lowering prices, 不对

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chuster 2016-05-28 16:48:44

because of increasing supply and lowering prices。 本意应该是:因为供给的上涨和物价的下跌,这里强调了名词,所以错了。 because of supply and prices。

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caymon 2016-03-22 12:23:21

which不知指代谁

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ziweiz2 2015-10-12 10:16:55

1. 句尾的which不可以修饰整句话 2 前句的主语是improved efficiency,后句主语是demand,不好,不如A,it直接指代前文主语,没有问题

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wxf621 2015-10-03 11:25:53

前面increasing supply and lowering prices 那后面的which到底是指increasing还是lowering

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Twill 2015-08-31 20:50:17

increasing supply boost consumption显然不合时。

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wywxiaonan 2015-05-22 16:17:40

which引导定语从句,是的boost的主语变成了increasing supply 和lowering price,与句意不同

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seacychen 2015-03-02 22:36:13

1) because of后面不能加doing 2) which指代不清 3)语义不对

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