The artist Renoir's last word was "flowers," spoken as a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden and was being arranged in a vase on his bedroom windowsill.
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echo3104 2014-09-01 16:36:19
Manhattan 5th Edition: You should use Past Perfect only to clarify or emphasize a sequence of past events. If the sequence is already obvious, we often do not need Past Perfect. 题目中，采花和插画的顺序很明显，无需用过去完成时表明先后顺序。
Cherry00721 2014-06-24 11:27:52
注意and链接前后的时态应该是一致的。而该句前面是过去完成时，而后面是一般过去式，不平行，所以错误。
明希望 2015-11-28 07:38:07
过去完成时使用错误
ztg591 2016-07-22 13:20:48
If the sequence is already obvious, we often do not need Past Perfect. was being 不对
Goooaway 2016-06-22 20:49:14
Manhattan 5th Edition: You should use Past Perfect only to clarify or emphasize a sequence of past events. If the sequence is already obvious, we often do not need Past Perfect. 题目中，采花和插画的顺序很明显，无需用过去完成时表明先后顺序。
huiminzi1124 2016-05-03 17:57:47
Manhattan 5th Edition: You should use Past Perfect only to clarify or emphasize a sequence of past events. If the sequence is already obvious, we often do not need Past Perfect. 题目中，采花和插画的顺序很明显，无需用过去完成时表明先后顺序。注意and链接前后的时态应该是一致的
hoper 2016-05-01 11:06:53
过去完成时错误
WinnieLee1 2015-12-18 16:56:34
注意and链接前后的时态应该是一致的
veravane 2015-10-20 20:42:27
and 连接前后的时态应一致平行
tiffanykid 2015-10-12 17:19:10
and连接前后动作的话，时态有问题。
jessie_yanhui 2015-09-04 11:45:51
根据句意，句中并没提到a bouquet of roses had been just picked from his garden，相反just picked from his garden应该只是做修饰成分，修饰a bouquet of roses
前程万里两不相干 2015-07-13 11:42:44
and 前后并列的时态不一致
