Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and will not publish his poetry
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xiaolaipi 2014-12-30 13:05:58
not more gifted than ...... is extremely modest and will not
庞呵呵 2015-08-19 11:50:49
Ahis poetry is unpublished与he is不并列，而且很awkward Bwith his poetry remaining unpublished不能与he is 并列，with独立主格结构应单独使用 C对 错选Dhis being gifted改变了原句意思。 Ebeing a 中a多余，而且后面的his poetry is unpublished被动表达的很awkward
hoper 2016-03-22 16:01:39
主动优于被动！
Garfield11 2015-10-29 17:15:49
注意As gifted 要加as 不然没法加上colleagues，后面he is...and 应该换成 will not publish ，前后平行
