Although he is as gifted as, if not more gifted than, many of his colleagues, he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished
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hoper 2016-03-22 15:56:51
A选项句意不符合逻辑，C选项的意思是：他就算不是比同事更有天分也是跟同事一样有天分，而且他还很谦虚，不打算出版自己的诗集。但是A选项是他的诗集没有出版，比起没有出版诗集，和不打算出版诗集，应该是不打算出版诗集跟他是一个谦虚的人更加搭配一些 his poetry和although引导的从句中主语不一致
Garrett 2014-07-29 10:49:16
his poetry is unpublished与he is不并列
fighting4g 2015-10-25 16:11:03
his poetry is unpublished与he is不并列，而且很awkward
又是羊 2016-10-04 04:31:18
he is和his poetry不并列
凡糕君 2016-07-16 13:58:53
his poetry is unpublished与he is不并列
hoper 2016-03-22 16:02:32
主动优于被动 he和his poetry能并列吗
Darkness 2015-12-25 16:46:29
Ahis poetry is unpublished与he is不并列，而且很awkward
celia0508 2015-07-28 16:29:47
his poetry 和and 前面的he is extremely modest 的逻辑主语不一致
满天星王昭 2015-05-22 22:59:34
he与poetry不平行
gloria熊 2015-05-18 19:55:42
平行：he不能和poetry平行
不想再拖延 2015-05-10 04:09:22
平行：he is extremely modest and his poetry is unpublished 不平行
