New items developed for automobiles in the 1997 model year included a safer air bag, which, unlike previous air bags, eliminated the possibility that a burst of smoke would appear when the bag Inflated and made an already terrified passenger think the car was on fire.
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victoria2766 2014-02-16 13:36:21
句意上 made 不与eliminated并列 不是air bags让乘客误以为着火了 而是a burst of smoke 让乘客误以为着火 C不对
时光老人 2015-11-29 23:14:49
make an..和前面的would appear平行，所以应该用原形
sc60434 2014-07-22 14:38:52
made平行到inflated→bag made..... 但應該是a burst of smoke make
Cwowo 2016-12-15 19:37:29
made 与inflated 平行，不符合句意，按照逻辑意思应该是smoke would appear and would make平行 省略would
谁在暗中眨眼睛 2016-12-04 15:52:24
made与inflated平行 动作发出者变成了 the bag 与后文意思不符
jandrea 2016-11-26 14:51:21
when the bag inflated and make... 不应该用made，这样变成bag made。。。
snow199511 2016-06-21 19:37:13
would apear...and make 逻辑： what makes an already terrified passenger think the car was on fire? a burst of smoke
tomaghost 2016-06-12 19:36:30
句意上 made 不与eliminated并列 不是air bags让乘客误以为着火了 而是a burst of smoke 让乘客误以为着火 C不对
小梨涡Shella 2016-05-19 19:39:21
made和inflated并列，（而不是和would并列），使得bag成为made的主语，不合逻辑。
wangforce 2016-05-12 15:35:05
made的主语是air bags，air bags不能让人认为车着火了，是爆开的air bags能
siasiasia 2016-04-06 19:01:16
made和inflated平行错误
时光老人 2015-12-24 22:06:55
made和前面的appear不平行
