New items developed for automobiles in the 1997 model year included a safer air bag, which, unlike previous air bags, eliminated the possibility that a burst of smoke would appear when the bag inflated, and making an already terrified passenger think the car was on fire.
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qiyeran346 2014-10-06 16:05:42
the core structure of the sentence is: New items...included a safer air bag, which (relative clause: refers to the air bag)...eliminated the possibility (relative clause: that...refers to the possibility) that a burst of smoke would appear(subordinate clause: when the bag inflated, modify the previous relative clause) to make an...passenger think the car was on fire.
snow199511 2016-06-21 19:35:39
would appear // making?
Christianity 2014-07-04 10:49:31
making 可以，and去掉
