Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers' vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing farming practices.
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sina_2520914463 2015-11-01 00:17:30
like the grassy fields and old pastures is not parallelism to the sandpipers' vanishing sandpipers' vanishing lacks of subjects
lovehideto 2016-07-22 05:10:01
sandpipers' vanishing事件与名词the grassy fields and old pastures不对等。主句没有谓语
Ines要上700 2016-03-04 20:05:01
invalid comparison; the subject here is the sandpipers' vanishing, rather than the sandpiper itself. "in the NE united states" is also inserted in a bad place; the comparison element should come at the head of this construction.
Oooohhh 2016-11-28 22:08:12
1.不平行；2.无谓语
SuperFreDWWW 2016-10-07 11:57:15
鸟的消失于草场牧场不平行。没动词。
snow199511 2016-06-05 19:53:29
1.lack of verb 2. vanishing // fields and old pastures?
LM檬先森。 2016-06-01 20:08:43
E. the sandpipers' vanishing事件与the grassy fields and old pastures不对等；主句不完整，缺少谓语；development与changes平行，不与practices平行。
echo_ming 2016-05-30 22:57:35
缺少谓语
oopsjanice 2016-05-05 15:31:59
uuu
Stylvia 2016-03-23 14:30:32
后半句话没有谓语
云mushroom 2016-03-03 21:25:25
同D
