The first shots of the American Revolution, fired at Lexington and Concord. Massachusetts, were, according to legend, heard around the world, but news of these shots, which were sent by swift messenger, took four days in reaching New York City as well as another additional eleven days to reach Charleston, South Carolina.
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乐天派L 2015-11-25 12:57:12
解答是错的，不要看。下面是我的解答： A. which就近修饰news of these shots，记住A of B结构中强调A，所以which修饰news，又因为news是集合名词，故应该用单数was。 B. that was...是对的，不存在解答说的歧义。B的错误主要在redundant(冗余），in order to不如to effective, also and another重复。当然，把原文中的限定性改成非限定性也值得商榷，因为限定性从句表示对修饰词的再划分，而非限定性定语从句只是表示补充说明，但是解答中说的歧义是不存在的。 C. that were 改成was D. in order to 不effective, another和in addition重复 E. Correct!
tz_yj 2014-10-21 10:16:41
which 后面跟were 表明which指代的是shots, 根据意思应该指代news，因此应该用was. take some days in doing 的结构也不不存在，而且前面用了in doing, 后面用to do, 句子结构不对称；as well as 不用于并列关系
Darius7 2016-04-07 10:08:16
A. which就近修饰news of these shots，记住A of B结构中强调A，所以which修饰news，又因为news是集合名词，故应该用单数was。
linlvyun 2016-12-02 18:13:39
as well as 语意有侧重点，跟and不一样
ColdSheldon 2016-10-19 12:50:46
A OF B， which 如果说不考虑跳跃指代，即修饰B，语意不对 是news被传递 如果符合原文，修饰news 就应该是was 三单 所以无论修饰哪个 都错
SuperFreDWWW 2016-10-06 20:28:51
news是单数用was
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-30 12:06:48
A of B 结构中强调 A news of these shots ， which were... 中news 是不可数名词，谓语应该是单数was in reaching 和 to reach 不平行 as well as 有主次之分，不用于并列
fantasticW 2016-06-16 11:27:27
A. which就近修饰news of these shots，记住A of B结构中强调A，所以which修饰news，又因为news是集合名词，故应该用单数was。
hoper 2016-03-17 19:43:09
as well as不能等同于and。因为as well as主要侧重于前面的部分，这里想表达的明显就是平行的两部分，没有更加侧重的意思。
hoper 2016-03-17 19:30:09
which应该指代news，因此应该用was. take some days in doing 的结构也不不存在，take time to do 而且前面用了in doing, 后面用to do, 句子结构不对称； another additional重复 as well as 不用于并列关系
ypheroin 2016-01-19 09:19:01
1. 非限定性定语从句在这里不对。 2. news -- which were 不对 3. as well as 4. another additional
