语法 Sentence Correction-2116

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Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

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katieeeeee 2014-11-18 23:16:14

平行词性不一样功能一样 as a result of and because 因为第一个原因是一个东西, 第二个原因是一件事 B. a tripling was due to C. 动名词所有格awkard with and n.平行错 D. 同位语错误 E. 没有句子 which指代错误

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BrooklynPal 2014-10-10 18:27:29

这个这个句子一点也不平行啊,肿么办??

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Fay Drew 2014-03-21 21:14:22

一定要注意with结构的正确运用。当句子中出现being时要小心,很有可能是wordy.

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小揪揪 2016-12-09 17:48:41

as a result of ````and because```(因为前后无法平行所以用俩中,来说明有俩个原因)

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malen 2016-11-02 11:54:05

as a result of 和because 都表示原因,可以平行。

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queenkat 2016-10-19 20:29:28

as a result of 和because都是表原因,逻辑意思上是平行的,所以用平行结构是可以接受的

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糯米团子QUQ 2016-10-07 15:50:14

平行词性不一样功能一样:as a result of and because。第一个原因是一个东西,第二个原因是一件事。

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不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-29 12:49:24

as a result 和 because可以平行

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Jjzo 2016-08-12 10:32:05

as a result of 可与because 看作基本平行:在结构和逻辑上都是合理的

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ethansue 2016-08-06 15:34:44

选项A,有异议; 选项B,错误 1)due to=caused by,使用起来要慎重。 2)in addition to+n, 介词短语,除。。。以外 In addition to native plants,this garden contains numerous trees and flowers from overseas. in addition,副词,相当于additionally, besides,, furthermore, This garden has the best collection of native plants.In addition,it contains numerous trees and flowers from overseas. 3) replace...with/by....用。。。替代。。。一般情况,可通用; 选项C,错误 独立主格结构,with +n+现在分词or过去分词。固定成分。题中 With charcoal's being replaced 错误 选项D,错误 从句缺少连接词; 选项E,错误 缺少mian verb

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Sparrow_7 2016-05-30 21:59:01

平行词性不一样功能一样 as a result of and because 因为第一个原因是一个东西, 第二个原因是一件事,不算重复??

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chuster 2016-05-29 11:00:07

as a result of 和because都是表原因,逻辑意思上是平行的,所以用平行结构是可以接受的。

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ocean09960802 2016-05-26 16:21:46

平行词性不一样功能一样 as a result of and because 因为第一个原因是一个东西, 第二个原因是一件事

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