Although the lines of competition are clearly defined in industries that are more established, they are blurred and indistinct in the Internet industry, as competing companies one day may be partners the next.
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Courtneybb 2015-07-10 17:34:55
If you see the order of elements in a sentence switched between choices, think about WHAT DESCRIBES WHAT ELSE. In making this decision, you may need to look at non-underlined words that are adjacent to the words undergoing the switch. Here, some answer choices contain "competing companies". Others contain "companies that compete", switching those two elements. This distinction should call your attention to the neighboring phrase "one day""”which can only sensibly describe competition, not the companies themselves.
former 2015-06-17 08:29:11
考点：逻辑语义，句法结构，代词指代，关系内容（比较）。 (1)逻辑语义+代词指代： 语义理解：在更加成熟的行业，行业竞争规则已经被清晰地制定，但在互联网行业，行业竞争规则是模糊并且不直接的，今天一起竞争的企业明天也许会成为伙伴。 ①首先找划线部分they的先行词；②在代词使用原则中提及：做主语的代词优先指代主语，因此they优先指代lines of competition；③进行最后一步检验：把the lines of competition带入后半句的逻辑语义正确。 （2)句法结构：A中as+名词+that引导的定从，那么as就作介词表作为，语义不合逻辑。排除ACD。 （3）关系内容（比较）：unlike。比较对象在性质上要一致。排除CDE。
hzwjs33 2016-10-13 17:12:09
最后one day直接跟了companies，但其实one day应该修饰compete
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-29 12:55:27
as companies that compete one day may be partners the next. one day 应修饰 compete这个动词 而competing companies one day改变了句意
LePetitPrince 2016-07-05 11:37:31
one day應該隨在compete後面，才符合語義，原句應該是as companies that compete one day較好
ocean09960802 2016-05-31 15:41:21
代词优先指代主语，而不是像which就近指代
chuster 2016-05-29 12:07:22
whereas lines of competition are......... the lines of................... 语义理解：在更加成熟的行业，行业竞争规则已经被清晰地制定，但在互联网行业，行业竞争规则是模糊并且不直接的，今天一起竞争的企业明天也许会成为伙伴。 做题步骤分析：①首先找划线部分they的先行词；②在代词使用原则中提及：做主语的代词优先指代主语，因此they优先指代lines of competition；③进行最后一步检验：逻辑语义。把 www.sharewithu.com lines of competition带入划线部分代替they后，逻辑语义是正确的，因此they使用正确 选项分析： A． more established industries，more有同时修饰established和industries的歧义 B． 正确 C． Unlike前后比较应该使用同种性质的词语 D． they在优先指代more established companies，而不是在指代lines of competition，此处where引导的定语从句在两个逗号之间，视为插入，可以忽略。 E． those在优先指代more established companies，而不是在指代lines of competition，此处with引导的定语在两个逗号之间，视为插入，可以忽略。 引申： 在主句中的代词，不优先指代两个逗号之间插入语的内容
huiminzi1124 2016-05-24 12:40:27
1.代词优先指代主语，而不是像which就近指代； 2.错误选项的more有修饰established和industries的歧义
Hygeia992 2016-04-08 15:58:00
注意A选项中的more established industries 的more修饰不明确。
Ivycoco 2016-03-20 05:39:34
one day只能做状语；直接修饰到competing companies
lauchiuyee 2015-08-14 15:02:36
【做错】在代词使用原则中提及：做主语的代词优先指代主语，因此they优先指代lines of competition；which用就近指代原则
