语法 Sentence Correction-2106

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Whereas lines of competition are clearly defined in the more established industries, in the Internet industry they are blurred and indistinct, as companies that compete one day may be partners the next.

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丰岭虹 2015-10-12 14:38:45

A有两处歧义 ① more established industries :more+adj.+noun 是一个歧义结构,more既可以做副词修饰adj.,表示更高程度的adj.,也可以做形容词修饰noun,表示更多的noun。这种结构的见一个排一个! ②one day:as companies that compete one day may be partners the next. 是应该理解成:as (companies that compete one day) may be partners the next.表示有天会竞争的公司? 还是理解成:as companies that compete (one day may be) partners the next.表示有天公司成为伙伴? B在这个地方用competing修饰了companies,使one day可以专心地修饰m 这个解释挺好哒

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lenka0monica 2014-07-19 16:23:14

Adv+adj+noun可能产生歧义,adv到底修饰adj还是noun 比如more established industries,到底是更完善的产业还是更多完善的产业;所以这时候用industries that are more established就更清楚(不要误以为冗长)

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Olivialiu 2014-09-05 17:07:31

more有同时修饰established和industries的歧义,industries that are more established 还是 more industries that are established.此处有歧义

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leemodest 2017-01-08 19:31:27

one day 修饰的是动作 即compete, 而不是名词the competing companies。

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ailing1004 2016-11-29 12:31:44

从句和主句让后后面跟的是修饰句。

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糯米团子QUQ 2016-11-03 12:54:41

Note that it's not just "in more established industries" - there's an article "the" before the noun phrase (in the more established industries), which refers to the noun "industries", leaving the "more established" as adjectives.

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不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-29 12:56:36

If you see the order of elements in a sentence switched between choices, think about WHAT DESCRIBES WHAT ELSE. In making this decision, you may need to look at non-underlined words that are adjacent to the words undergoing the switch. Here, some answer choices contain "competing companies". Others contain "companies that compete", switching those two elements. This distinction should call your attention to the neighboring phrase "one day""”which can only sensibly describe competition, not the companies themselves.

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金子0913 2016-09-27 15:35:20

注意介词的平行

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阿卜灵 2016-09-03 19:00:29

compete 形容 one day

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Sparrow_7 2016-05-30 22:20:35

more established industries :more+adj.+noun 是一个歧义结构,more既可以做副词修饰adj.,表示更高程度的adj.,也可以做形容词修饰noun,表示更多的noun,用这个排除???

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chuster 2016-05-29 12:06:37

more established industries有歧义。代词做主语时,优先指代主语,所以指代Lines of competition.没有逻辑问题,正确。 D中代词优先指代了more established industries,错误。 ron说了代词指代模糊不是个问题,1.逻辑意思清楚 2.与要指代的平行 3.与不指代的不平行,所以B中they与它要指代的东西平行,与Industries不平行,所以是对的。 competing companies,相互竞争的公司,competing做形容词--互相竞争的,比较简洁。

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ocean09960802 2016-05-26 16:26:57

more established industries :more+adj.+noun 是一个歧义结构,more既可以做副词修饰adj.,表示更高程度的adj.,也可以做形容词修饰noun,表示更多的noun。这种结构的见一个排一个!

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huiminzi1124 2016-05-24 12:41:26

A有两处歧义 ① more established industries :more+adj.+noun 是一个歧义结构,more既可以做副词修饰adj.,表示更高程度的adj.,也可以做形容词修饰noun,表示更多的noun。这种结构的见一个排一个! ②one day:as companies that compete one day may be partners the next. 是应该理解成:as (companies that compete one day) may be partners the next.表示有天会竞争的公司? 还是理解成:as companies that compete (one day may be) partners the next.表示有天公司成为伙伴? B在这个地方用competing修饰了companies,使one day可以专心地修饰m 这个解释挺好哒

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