Studies show that young people with higher-than-average blood pressure and a history of high blood pressure runs in the family are more likely than others to develop a severe form of the condition.
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Charlotte0305 2015-06-23 22:52:47
and前后成分不对等 young people 与a history runs in the family 前面是名词，后面是句子
songzy3411 2015-04-02 21:20:28
runs不平行
Courtneybb 2015-07-09 17:40:32
has one very glaring correctness issue: modifiers NEVER start with "and". the whole thing about the history of high blood pressure has to be a modifier, modifying the young people; not only is this not a modifier (because it starts with "and"), but it doesn't even tell us that we're talking about the young people's families. it merely says "the" family. not acceptable.
zjy1121 2016-12-16 21:13:37
这里的and 又歧义，不确定是与young people平行，还是与blood pressure平行，错误，runs直接动词，不是修饰词，这更不对了，前面不论与哪个名词平行都不对了
前程万里两不相干 2016-10-16 08:19:32
并列结构中的介词最好不要省略
shisu0610041 2016-08-31 14:05:19
一个词(young people) and一句话（their families ...)+谓语动词，这明显就错 A和C都是错在这点上，注意这里的runs 是谓语动词，不是修饰语，因为没有that引导定语从句
在My9950213 2016-08-08 10:16:08
and 后面少了with的话，并列有歧义，a history可以跟young people并列，也可跟blood pressure 并列
Goooaway 2016-06-11 14:46:34
这里不是and的关系，而且也不平行。。whose不用就近修饰这样看来。。。A with B whose 也可以---
Zzzwenxin 2016-04-12 10:39:10
and 连接的并列部分有歧义，可以是与higher-than-average blood pressure并列，也可以与young people并列
siasiasia 2016-04-10 17:06:50
and前后不平行；
y君必胜 2016-04-06 19:32:32
runs时态不对，而且and前加个with在意思上会更清楚，不然有and不平行的嫌疑
恬恬会更强 2016-03-31 10:30:58
如果a history 和 higher-than-average blood pressure并列的话 runs 应该改成running
时光老人 2015-12-29 20:16:01
如果这里是higher与a history平行的话，with 和后面的runs in..在语义上就累赘了。并且在语法上runs应该改成running
