She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won the Nobel Prize for Literature.
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micyuc 2015-07-28 16:15:14
应该为turned away from...to... she在第一句句首没有指代对象，先行词不存在，不能指代第二句的主语 as well as没有and好，表意存在主次分别
jessicachow 2016-02-01 13:40:28
she放在开头错误。
claire95 2016-10-24 19:38:34
与original sentence相比可以发现，SL是turn away from。。。to。。。 B选项把to改成and改变了原本的意思。 没注意到的点：as well as 有主次之分，强调前者，但原句是and并列
Monicca 2016-11-27 09:34:45
she是指示代词，在出现的时候应该向前找指代，这里没有指代对象that不能指人
学霸菌niki 2016-09-19 11:04:41
She放在开头不好，as well as 不如and
blculily 2015-10-22 11:06:31
She无指代，and novelist Selma使得两个分句分裂成两个人的事；turn away from…to…改为了from…and…少了"弃前取后"的逻辑关系；as well as有主次之分，分开了first woman和first Wewdish writer的平等关系，使得that仅指代了Swedish writer，使得前面became the first woman成为第一个女人，意思不对。The first…to do sth正确用法。
calewu 2015-09-05 12:42:49
that不能指代人
olivezcy 2015-07-30 14:57:14
turned away,wrote;became在此选项里变成同样重要的动词级别了 反而win被放在了定语从句中；不合乎句意逻辑
olivezcy 2015-07-25 13:00:02
turned away的目的是为了写农民的浪漫故事，turned away 和write之间应该表目的而非同一级的，句子逻辑意思不太正确，排除
ccccchhhhh 2015-07-11 08:50:09
as well as有主次之分 原句是并列关系 turn away from to...
