Starfish, with anywhere from five to eight arms, have a strong regenerative ability, and if they lose one arm it is quickly replaced, sometimes with the animal overcompensating, growing an extra one or two.
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jessicachow 2016-01-19 17:57:00
if…then…结构要同主同被，if they lose one arm(主动)it is quickly replaced(被动)；commaV-ing用法错，要体现前后次序。
yjylain 2016-01-01 16:50:27
if A(then) B 结构要求平行。A是主动态，B也要是主动态。If they lose one arm they replace a new arm
yiqiqi117 2014-08-26 00:16:26
条件从句主动，结果从句被动。 overcompensating,和growing 逻辑关系不清楚。（有多重理解）
Candicelala 2016-10-09 05:41:38
overcompensating and growing 是两个应该平行的部分
不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-07 16:34:53
overcompensating 与 growing 应该并列 中间差and
琴惊 2016-08-03 16:34:56
if A(then) B 结构要求平行
Ines要上700 2016-07-13 05:44:51
(1) In addition, unlike A and B, which tell us "with/by the animal overcompensating and growing extra arms", C through E tell us "with/by the animal overcompensating, growing extra arms". The linkage in A and B is more appropriate since these actions occur in sequence. The animal indeed overcompensates and grows extra arms. This can be used to eliminate C, D and E (2) A, D and E break the flow of the sentence by having a mismatch of active and passive voice in the condition and consequence. A is passive->active (if one arm is lost it replaces it) while D and E are active->passive (if they lose one arm it is quickly replaced). Ideally, both clauses would be active ("if they lose one arm they quickly replace it" as in C). The next best option is to have two passive options ("if one arm is lost it is quickly replaced"). This can be used to eliminate A, D, and E
Ines要上700 2016-07-13 05:44:51
(1) In addition, unlike A and B, which tell us "with/by the animal overcompensating and growing extra arms", C through E tell us "with/by the animal overcompensating, growing extra arms". The linkage in A and B is more appropriate since these actions occur in sequence. The animal indeed overcompensates and grows extra arms. This can be used to eliminate C, D and E (2) A, D and E break the flow of the sentence by having a mismatch of active and passive voice in the condition and consequence. A is passive->active (if one arm is lost it replaces it) while D and E are active->passive (if they lose one arm it is quickly replaced). Ideally, both clauses would be active ("if they lose one arm they quickly replace it" as in C). The next best option is to have two passive options ("if one arm is lost it is quickly replaced"). This can be used to eliminate A, D, and E
托福必胜！！！ 2016-06-06 08:25:13
if A(then) B 结构要求平行。A是主动态，B也要是主动态。If they lose one arm they replace a new arm
ocean09960802 2016-06-02 13:40:23
if A(then) B 结构要求平行。A是主动态，B也要是主动态。If they lose one arm they replace a new arm
Kenny_wong 2016-04-21 15:05:33
1,sometimes 2,it is replaced with arm(should be arm)
