语法 Sentence Correction-1894

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In an effort to reduce the number of fires started by cigarettes, a major tobacco company is test-marketing a cigarette for which thin layers of extra paper are used to decrease the amount of oxygen that enters the cigarette, and thereby slowing the rate at which it burns and lowering the heat it generates.

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sophiayao 2015-12-18 16:55:25

and应链接两个句子;thereby 引导分词短语无法与and前面的句子并列。

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qiyeran346 2014-10-03 18:27:41

and thereby slowing is a fragment

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ymyyyy 2015-11-09 19:52:51

thereby引导的从句 并没有与前面句子并列的意思

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