In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who dwelt in an upper realm whose floor was the sky, and who has the power of giving and of taking away the breath of life.
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ZoeyYu 2015-10-31 19:18:47
1.whose与前面的who辨析不清。前面的who是指Esugetu Emissee，后面的whose可能和EE的混淆，其实应该代指realm，用which比较好。 2.power of +名词，而非分词
bravedear 2014-10-22 17:23:53
who has 时态不平行而且whose就近应该指代的是realm，但是前面的who是god，就造成了歧义，所以直接用in which或者where是绝对更加清晰的。因为whose可以修饰人也可以修饰物。 用whose的时候要考虑如果就近指代会不会和主语的指代产生歧义。
奋战 2015-02-12 17:16:35
全句用过去时 has应改为had
queenkat 2016-10-11 22:22:47
whose可以歧义修饰前面的ee 然后have the power to do sth;have the power of sth
CIWang 2016-08-31 13:58:17
Has 的tense錯了
克村 2016-03-19 20:45:18
跟在and who 之后的时态不对, 应该用过去式
飞舞的彩蝶 2015-10-19 20:42:51
whose should be where or in which
oihuhuhu 2015-09-01 09:20:57
与dwelt保持平行，用had。where和in which没有差别，都可以用。
vivian_fordream 2015-08-11 20:47:47
who has the power
foreverlulay 2015-07-01 21:53:13
has 时态错误
阿阿阿阿阿阿水 2014-11-06 18:17:51
这是个平行，dwelt是过去式，所以后面的has错误，应该用过去式had
