语法 Sentence Correction-1801

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In Greek theology the supreme being was Esaugetu Emissee (Master of Breath), who dwelt in an upper realm in which the sky was the floor, and who had the power to give and to take away the breath of life.


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Ellen1889 2014-07-17 12:39:23

supre being 神,上帝 dwell in 居住,这里是过去式,正好和后面的and had并列 The meaning between" have the power to do " and have the power of ..." is different 1, have the power to do sth. means control some thing. 2, have the power of sth means authorized about ...

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Jesterleir 2016-12-26 18:59:23

who...and who...平行

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Ines要上700 2016-04-01 20:55:42

因为前后平行啊,who dwelt in an upper realm与who had the power平行,to give 和to take也平行啊

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halowwww 2016-12-20 20:31:02

A正确,who...and who平行。。。 B选项中,having有做后置定语修饰floor的嫌疑

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励志yy 2016-11-17 11:37:17

who...and who...可以平行

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chuster 2016-10-04 19:41:34

1.who 指代EE,whose又指代realm,有歧义,不好。 2.power to do sth,做某事的能力。 3.who..and who...句意上是从句的平行,改成分词不好。 4.时态注意。

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遗落的繁星 2016-09-13 11:23:00

在希腊神话中。权力最大的神是 Esaugetu Emissee(掌管呼吸的),他住在最高的地方,那儿天空是地板,他拥有给予和夺走生命呼吸的权利。

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chuster 2016-05-25 20:56:13

用从句并列比较好,其他的分词都有就近修饰的感觉;have the power to do.

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Ines要上700 2016-04-01 20:59:31

in which 引导的是非限定性定语从句修饰realm

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Eason633 2016-03-14 11:26:42

in which 指代 upper realm; who..., and who平行

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soulmise 2016-01-09 21:46:54

因为整个句子的时态是过去式,was dwelt,所以has要用had来保持一致,所以不能选A

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