So dogged were Frances Perkins' investigations of the garment industry, and her lobbying for wage and hour reform was persistent, Alfred E. Smith and Franklin D. Roosevelt recruited Perkins to work within the government, rather than as a social worker.
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jyxoo 2015-03-07 00:24:04
her指代谁？如何判定性别
jyxoo 2015-03-07 00:24:05
her指代谁？如何判定性别
ppj 2015-02-08 14:20:32
首先，最后一个句子与前面的句子之间缺少连词，逗号不能连接两个句子滴；其次，so......that结构的that没有体现,so.......cross it!
CIWang 2016-08-31 14:11:06
So.....that
奋战 2015-02-13 17:00:29
有and 可看出左右不平行 一边是倒装 一边陈述语序 尴尬
奋战 2015-02-13 16:58:57
so... that 结构 句末少了that
Phoebeqqe 2014-08-05 21:34:55
没有呼应so…that结构；既然有and就要前后平行，不平行
JulianLoveGmat 2014-07-26 15:20:40
so...that...没有体现
lmlgrace 2013-10-03 10:41:31
so 平行
