语法 Sentence Correction-179

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Dressed as a man and using the name Robert Shurtleff, Deborah Sampson, the first woman to draw a soldier's pension, joined the Continental Army in 1782 at the age of 22, injured three times, and was discharged in 1783 because she was too ill to serve.

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IAMBACK 2016-06-08 15:17:49

injure主动只能去injure 别人, you injured us。 被injure要用被动。 we were injured

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gjf1995315 2016-10-13 15:55:28

injure 伤害,损害的意思,要用被动才能体现出是ds受伤,不然会被误解为ds伤害了别人

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sherry_liuxy 2016-06-16 12:13:33

injured 应该是被动的~

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八毛Y 2016-12-02 21:10:53

be injured这个状态和joined the army或者discharged应当是独立的并列关系。

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shane325 2016-10-21 16:34:08

"was" injured

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claire95 2016-10-09 20:53:56

injure sb 自己被伤害是be injured 如果这里是done结构,修饰前面的名词22,不合逻辑,所以应该是was injured与was discharged平行。

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前程万里两不相干 2016-10-08 05:27:54

区别 did 和done. 这里injured不加was,可能会被当成done。有歧义。就算是done 结构,做修饰成分也不对,因为之前有joined 做修饰成分,2个修饰成分并列,至少也要加连词。

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meiyouyhm 2016-09-20 21:54:39

injure应该被动,才能与joined the army 和 was discharged 平行

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feizhutou 2016-09-14 00:08:23

joined,加入, was injured and was discharged 并列平行, 主要的问题就是 injured 要使用被动 was injured because she was... 无法体现出事情发生的先后顺序,

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shisu0610041 2016-09-10 21:27:52

and 链接并列成分时,前边的be动词不可省略

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不考到730誓不罢休的小星星 2016-09-04 14:03:34

injured要用被动形式与joined和was discharged并列

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张三0925 2016-08-11 10:42:26

injured 做状语省略was应该是没问题的,但是A的结构明显更优,joined...,was injured...,and was discharged...;如果用injured表示修饰,结构就变成了joine...,injured, and was discharged,一个修饰语放在中间感觉上像 DS这个人injure了谁,表示主动一样;所以优选A

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